Dreadion/dreadian

[Monjaro]

Racial Name: Dreadion
Nick Names: Demon(s), monster(s), ...
Genders?: Male/Female/Hermaphrodite
Average Life span: 100000-110000 years

General Appearance: The appearance of a Dreadion would resemble that of a satyr if not for the verity of differences. For starters they don't have hooves but instead have soft talon like appendages for their toes and fingers which can be hardened to deliver a deadly gash. Their arms are elongate and their legs digitized (like that of a dogs but more visible) Their skin is a very dark shade of grey and like their talons, it can be hardened in certain locations.(chest, shoulders, wrists, spine, knees and elbows.) Their pelt is a black fur with red streaks covering it. also some Dreadion have grey or white hair growing from their cranium. further details are differentiated because of certain aspects of a sex and other factors which i'll explain through a picture.    

Visible representation.:

males and females share mostly the same attributes besides their horns and a little chest hair. for the females this hair is useful for when they mature. both also have matching tales which has the common pattern for low strengthened Dreadian  they both share the same eyes and teeth lay-out and not much else. the Hermaphrodite how ever is a combination of the both. instead of having one or the other horn type, Hermaphrodites have a combination of both into one. plus the added bonuses of a extended tail bone which gives of the look of a third fin on their tale. unlike the singled sexes the Hermaphrodites has a single large eye surrounded by 12 smaller ones which is centered on the left side of the head this how ever can be different if the Dreadion chooses it. A Hermaphrodite at a young age are hard to differentiate but when they get older they'll slip into a certain personality which determines how their body alters. teeth very depending upon certain Dreadian which can sometimes be the same.

Common Personality: when at a younger stage a Dreadion will have a bland personality but over time they start to find it and build on it. but only on a certain criteria. Dreadian will grow three aspect of a personality trait 2 being lower aspects and 1 being a major aspect for when they are old enough. Example: naivety, innocence will be lower aspects for their earlier years (10000-25000) and then things like justice or honor being a major aspect (25000-110000) but to be able to gain any aspects they have to of reached a high level of mental and physical strength to build the personality. a demonstration would be of the Dreadion Slash. when he started to gain his aspect. of (Minor) naivety, innocence. he started to gain a look of a scruffy kid when is came to his hair. he is also a lot smaller in size comparison to other Dreadian due to that change. during this conversion some Dreadian grow a split personality which resides in their tail. this can also alter the appeal of the tale. in Slashes case his tale has altered to have a stiff smiley face printed on it.

Society: the Dreadian live in a benevolent dictatorship. where one high ranking dreadion house rules with absolute power but keeping in mind the needs of the people. in this layout their is also other houses. a house can't take power anytime but instead can give points and tips on how to handle scenarios to the leading power. only when the head of the leading house dies without an appointed heir, will they then have a tournament between the houses to see which of them gets to gain the position. mainly envolving death-matches and etc.
Home Planet: Dreadian live in a pocket dimension coinciding with earth   called the hyper-zone by Dreadian and the dread zone by Humans. humans can enter the Hyper-zone by two options. 1 is to be escorted there by a Dreadion. and 2 is to encounter it while in the astral plane(dreaming or dead)and this is very rare. when crossing over into the Hyper-Zone Humans will experience a long list of side effects such as; night-mares, delusions, loss of depth perception and elephant/mouse syndrome.

note:

Their is a very serious time difference to the Hyper-zone then the Human world. In the Hyper-zone, 1000 year = 1 year in the human world. and this isn't because of Dreadion to human lifespan conversion math. time is very distorted and it runs faster in the hyper zone then on earth. this is why when humans or their consciousness enter the Hyper-zone they experience view distortion or the elephant part or elephant/mouse syndrome.
Relationships: mirrored to human relationships.
Reproduction mirrored to human relationships.
Guardians: A Dreadion can be raised by other Dreadian or DR. DR stands for the Devil Reject. which i'll explain more under other. DR tamed to resemble their original personality or instinct of before they died can be left to look after young Dreadian (5000-10000) where they can grow relationships and help them discover their  minor personality traits.
Symbol Rules: Dreadion share a common symbol which is more of a national symbol. it come as 3 vertical lines and 2 slightly horizontal lines. this how ever changes with house holds. they can keep a standard house symbol to represent themselves.

Naming Conventions: Dreadion naming conventions are awkward in some cases. Their names can resemble objects or actions for examples; Melody, Slash. while for higher rank dreadian they can take an immortal name like for example; Vickus, Kharam, Hairel. no dreadion has a last name unless they translate their name into the human style for disguising purposes for example; Slash could be Slade Ashley, Melody could be Melony odyssey.
Racial powers: Dreadian have 4 major abilities. the first is their ability to teleport or to jump portals. this ability resides from the energy stored in their tail or second soul. but only appearing in mid to high level dreadian, it allows them to travel long distances or maneuver better in combat. second as i mentioned already is the fact that they can harden parts of their body to become a titanium like shield against incoming physical attacks, but only on a few parts of their body can they do this. low to high level dreadian have this ability from birth. thirdly is the ability to transform into the appearance of a human. to transverse into the human world with out being the biggest distraction to human society, mid to high dreadian can alter their appearance to that of a human but only in dark areas for when they enter the light they are forced to reveal their original form. lastly is the ability to overhaul their whole body into an overclock. nick-named the  x mode, this boosts all categories of a dreadian attributes. making them faster, stronger, and more agile. while in this mode a black shroud will cover the dreadion and take a form that represents the dreadion them-self, an example, One shroud could form into skeletal wings. this ability appears in only high level dreadian.
Attributes: fast, agile and powerful monstrosity that will most likely give a weaker man a heart attack if not prepared. an apex predator that may not want to be dealt with. how ever they can still be killed by conventional means.
Traits: red eyes, large mouths, dark skin, grey-white hair, horns, tails, large claws.
IM System: restep-much (slightly modded version of pesterchum to work with the time delusion.)
Typing rules: basic typing rules, like humans.

Other:

Brief-Dreadian-Belief-History: (Another time)
DevilRejects: their are two ways a Devil Reject can come to be. A concision of a living being/animal that has passed on into the after life but were rejected by means still unknown or when a Devil Reject infects a dead corpse.  when brought into their new existence they act violently dangerous if not tamed and settled, after settling they can regain their memories of their previous life. a DR can reproduce by either finding a suitable partner of the original species or by infecting a corpse as said before. when a Devil Reject is tamed they can be used for all things like care, foot warriors, heavy to light personnel and day to day other uses.
Interaction: the Dreadian interactions with the outer universe is that of collecting rampit DR's or collecting lost technology that vanished from their realm and made it into the other.

[Monjaro]

if someone could give me a quick review on what i have done so far that would be great

[DistantRed]

Looks like a race I might use so far, but...

~sometimes you say Dreadion as the plural, but sometimes you say Dreadions. Be consistent.

Lifespan:

~years are kinda lazy, but that's a tiny nitpick of mine, though you kinda explain why a little.

General Appearence:
~certain locations can be confused for actual location, try "parts of the body" or something along those lines

~(H) - write out the word or copy-paste it

[Monjaro]

Okay, thanks for the tip. I'll try to get on to that. and when i get to the back story of the race it will explain it more... if i could figure out how to put it in a not so religious term.

[Monjaro]

Can I get this Checked out?

[TheChaotic1]

I am checkin this out right now, don't worry it will get done.

[Monjaro]

Thank-you.

[TheChaotic1]

Approved.

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