Re: Godstuck discussion (Closed!)

by **Umbra** Sat May 07, 2016 10:24 am

Soooooo... What'd you think of my piece? :3

(Warning: Umbra-Chan is a feedback whore.)

by **BurdenKing** Sat May 07, 2016 10:32 am

I liked it man, it's a good opener and it's distinct from the other gods in how it's protrayed. Though, why do you have jack noir chained up in your basement?

by **timesrowKilling** Sat May 07, 2016 10:39 am

Yeah, I kinda want to know why hes there also.

by **Umbra** Sat May 07, 2016 10:41 am

Good question! I would have to answer; mostly Shenanigans. :P

She thought he might be a useful tool but broke his mind accidently and thereafter kept him as a pet.

by **timesrowKilling** Sat May 07, 2016 10:46 am

Makes sense. And sounds like something Amaira would definitely do

by **Umbra** Sat May 07, 2016 10:49 am

Oh most certainly. And pour Rustblood. Meeting a God must be an incredibly intimidating experience, especially when they have given them no reason to pity them.

by **timesrowKilling** Sat May 07, 2016 10:55 am

She definitely is the one that acts most like a god.

by **BurdenKing** Sat May 07, 2016 10:57 am

I bet he's regretting he ddn't choose any of the other gods, who are little wreaks in some manner.
ALso, I'm having an inordinate amount of trouble figuring out hwat to do with Bevlea DX

Any ideas on how i could manifest her bargaining theme?

by **timesrowKilling** Sat May 07, 2016 10:59 am

Maybe she could have a place almost devoid of possessions? or she could be hoarding possessions of the dead gods in hopes that she could make a bargain with a higher power to bring them back?

by **Umbra** Sat May 07, 2016 11:00 am

Maybe I'll have her break every trope with the rust blood.

Like awkwardly flirting and just generally acting like a secluded teenager :P

by **Umbra** Sat May 07, 2016 11:05 am

Gosh, I'm not sure... It's a difficult thing to work around.

Acceptance is easy, you just gotta be all IDGAF and act normal.

But bargaining? I guess, just in a constant state of praying and begging. I don't know...

EDIT: timesrow's ideas are pretty good :3

by **BurdenKing** Sat May 07, 2016 11:07 am

ooooh, i like the hoarding idea. She basically ha sbeen slolwy accumulating and recreating their posessions,in the hopes that maybe if she's made their homes ready for them again in some manner, they'll come back. Or if she can surround herself with their possessions, she can feel complete again.

Maybe she could have the most complete shrines of the fallen gods?

by **Umbra** Sat May 07, 2016 11:10 am

Yep! That sounds like a cool idea. To do with bargaining, maybe they've gotten a Gambling addiction?

Just speedballing thoughts.

by **timesrowKilling** Sat May 07, 2016 11:11 am

I'd be fine with her having the most complete of the shrines.

by **BurdenKing** Sat May 07, 2016 11:19 am

they'ed be mobile shrines, due to her likely never dropping her nomadic life style. I wonder if like, her attendants have to remind her to eat and take care of herself, as she has become so obsessed with her tasks that she has long ago started to forget to do anything else.

by **Umbra** Sat May 07, 2016 11:21 am

Gods don't need to sleep, they don't need to eat. They are beyond that now.

But they might have to remind her to wash herself and her clothes.

by **BurdenKing** Sat May 07, 2016 11:31 am

true they don't need it, but it probably helps keep sane. Dreams and rem sleep are good for sanity keeping. Also they are still expending energy and get tired.

And food can offer more the nutrients, it can provide warmth and comfort with it's flavor and texture and the knowledge it was prepared for you.

by **Umbra** Sat May 07, 2016 11:34 am

Aye, they probably wouldn't stop eating due to status quo being the real God here, but I'm just saiyan.

Unlike us mere mortals, they need not our worldly sustenance.

But it's your character. DO what you want with them. :3

by **timesrowKilling** Sat May 07, 2016 11:41 am

nice pun there

by **Umbra** Sat May 07, 2016 11:44 am

It's one of those puns you don't have to work for. At all.

by **BurdenKing** Sat May 07, 2016 12:37 pm

I don posted :D

by **Umbra** Sat May 07, 2016 12:40 pm

Nao we have to wait for Duelling to begin the cycle anew :P

by **Umbra** Sat May 07, 2016 12:51 pm

Also, by the way, your piece was f*cking amazing!
Since all the attendants but mine are singing, I added in a theme which I thought might be a good song for them to sing :3

by **BurdenKing** Sat May 07, 2016 12:58 pm

Was it? I thought I dragged it along personally XD

by **Umbra** Sat May 07, 2016 1:04 pm

Nope, just you and Duelling. But you gotta admit I picked a good piece :3

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